The Conclave

The Ordos Majoris - Roleplay => Out Of Character => Topic started by: Jamas Orian on August 25, 2010, 09:04:58 AM

Title: The Mouse, the Lion and the Eagle Feedback Thread
Post by: Jamas Orian on August 25, 2010, 09:04:58 AM
As it says on the tin =]. Comments and critique welcomed.
Title: Re: The Mouse, the Lion and the Eagle Feedback Thread
Post by: Jamas Orian on August 26, 2010, 12:34:42 AM
Some spelling errors fixed and some more added.
Title: Re: The Mouse, the Lion and the Eagle Feedback Thread
Post by: MarcoSkoll on August 26, 2010, 12:51:36 AM
I haven't read the next part yet, but I'd REALLY say that you should put new passages in as a new post. I know most forums frown on double posting, but it is important here.

It's much harder to pick up where you've left off without the post breaks to make it clearer where the new segments are.
Title: Re: The Mouse, the Lion and the Eagle Feedback Thread
Post by: Jamas Orian on August 26, 2010, 09:27:58 AM
Righto =]