The Mouse, the Lion and the Eagle Feedback Thread

[Jamas Orian]

As it says on the tin =]. Comments and critique welcomed.

[Jamas Orian]

Some spelling errors fixed and some more added.

[MarcoSkoll]

I haven't read the next part yet, but I'd REALLY say that you should put new passages in as a new post. I know most forums frown on double posting, but it is important here.

It's much harder to pick up where you've left off without the post breaks to make it clearer where the new segments are.

[Jamas Orian]

Righto =]