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Offline Aurelius 12

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The Lady OOC
« on: February 21, 2011, 05:56:58 PM »
As some of you may be aware, The Lady is the background for my characters that will be at the IGT. If you want to get a sneak peek of the models then why not check out my modelling thread.

I welcome comments and criticisms both on the writing style and the background itself. Ultimately the aim is to produce a somewhat disjointed set of notes and reports all of which relate to Lady Eleanor and ultimately tell the story of how she came to be in the sector my campaigns are set in.

Also, if you feel like your player character/alter ego might have some speculation, comments to make in character that would be great! So if you want to add your own musings and theories and opinions etc. please feel free!

And the Saint did weep when she saw how lost the people were. Seven tears fell upon Gomorrah. Seven tears to wash away their sin. A deluge of heavenly tears drowned their world in an ocean of forgiveness. The people cleansed in a sea of nuclear fire.

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Re: The Lady OOC
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 01:24:53 PM »
Petty observation about Harakis' planetary data: A planet of Mercury size and mass would also have Mercury gravity (~3.7 m/s), not "Terra norm".
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Re: The Lady OOC
« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 01:35:47 PM »
I quite agree. However it's all part of the terraforming process. I'm working on the principle that there are some kind of ancient artificial gravity generators deep within the planet. I figure it may come up more as the plot expands, if the action takes us back to Harakis.
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Re: The Lady OOC
« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2011, 10:34:41 AM »
Right then that's your lot! Hopefully it's been a enlightening and entertaining read!
And the Saint did weep when she saw how lost the people were. Seven tears fell upon Gomorrah. Seven tears to wash away their sin. A deluge of heavenly tears drowned their world in an ocean of forgiveness. The people cleansed in a sea of nuclear fire.

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Re: The Lady OOC
« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2011, 01:22:05 PM »
I enjoyed that, well written and very interesting. I like the diferent characters all contributing to tell the story from different angles; something I may steal borrow in future writing.
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