[Dolnikan]

Hello everyone,

I am new to the Conclave but not new to Inquisitor, I decided to try and write a little something myself. I apologise for my bad english, I'm not very good with languages and it isn't my first.

The Circles of the Wise is about  an acolyte who has been sent to infiltrate a cult. She is a moderately powerful psyker who specializes in shapeshifting.

[Dolnikan]

I have just posted another piece, please comment on it so I could make it less painful to read.

[Zephon]

Interesting - I was expecting an infiltration story right up until the end of the second post, what with the seemingly perfect disguise and extensive preparation. It was a real surprise when everything fell to bits. Are we going to hear more about the Circles of the Wise and whatever they're up to?

[Dolnikan]

There will certainly be more on the circles, I just have to write some more before I get back to them.

[Dolnikan]

I have posted another part, I really hope that people aren't being bored to death by my bad writing.

[Consulaire]

An enjoyable read so far!

[Torerador]

I have certainly enjoyed it. Keep writing!!

[Dolnikan]

Hello everyone!

After a long time I finally got the time to write something again, I hope you like it.

[Draco Ferox]

I am liking it so far. Personally, I don't find it painful to read at all, and in fact, it's written in a much better way than many of the people I know would write.

Keep it up, and I'll stay waiting for the next installment.

[MarcoSkoll]

The writing is good, so don't take this as a criticism of the actual content - but this is somewhat awkward to read, as solid block of texts without paragraphs usually are.

Breaking it up into paragraphs to make it easier on the eye would probably mean more people would take the time to read your work.

[Dolnikan]

I have posted another piece. It took a while to find the energy to write it. I also rearranged the older bits to be more readable.

[Dolnikan]

I posted another update, please comment, I'm sure that there is a lot left to be improved on.

[MEHughes]

Really liking this Dolnikan, looking forward to further updates

[Dolnikan]

Thanks, I finally got to update again, I had a part of this already and completed it with my fevered brain. I hope that it is at least half decent.

[Dolnikan]

And another small update, I have the feeling that inspiration is returning to me.