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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #240 on: March 15, 2012, 10:08:53 PM »
Nightmare-week nearly over... will get an update ready over the weekend.

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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #241 on: March 15, 2012, 10:28:25 PM »
I should assure you, I am working on something, but I got a little sidetracked with making sure I'd got everything written up for this week's Dark Heresy... only to have to cancel the session because only one person turned up on Skype. D'oh.
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #242 on: March 16, 2012, 04:13:38 AM »
Double.

This new post is evidence of why I should be forbidden from writing late at night. I will probably be making adjustments to improve the story telling (I'm not entirely pleased with the structure and show/tell ratios), but nonetheless, I think I have just written a post with an Inquisitrix walking around in her skivvies.

Mind you, it wouldn't be a proper RP from me without at least one reason for everyone to think I'm a pervert.
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #244 on: March 16, 2012, 03:50:12 PM »
I have written a short piece about Iota arriving near the landing site, should I post it or wait?
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #245 on: March 16, 2012, 09:32:38 PM »
Mind you, it wouldn't be a proper RP from me without at least one reason for everyone to think I'm a pervert.
I was wondering when that would come up :P

Nightmare week finally over, will probably post something in the morning.

Dolnikan: Feel free to make a post. Like I said, this week's been horrible, so hopefully I'll be able to put a meaningful response together that also moves the story along.
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #246 on: March 17, 2012, 04:18:06 PM »
double

Triple-part post with a Vargas update in the middle, because I wanted to at least try and resolve the part with Vargas/Silon.

It's fair to say that the Ancient is far too busy/happy killing civilians and causing collateral damage to be all that interested in either Andreas or Iota, but he still poses a pretty high risk to both of them. So he shot at the building Iota was standing on because he thought there were civilians up there (and that she was one of them).

In terms of location, the Ancient is around the south end of the centre (using the map, between the "i" in "City Centre" and the "R" in "Red Light District"). Goruvich is also around there but he's gone a bit further southeast. I can draw on the map if anyone would like that.

EDIT: Added another Zagan scene. He's not messing around here...

If anyone would like the specifications for a Secutor, I've put something together that I can put up as/when people need it. We already know it's a bomber, so that bit isn't a huge spoiler; worth keeping in mind, however, that even with the advances in tech between now and the 40Kverse, they're still on the same scale as -- if not bigger than --  the contemporary B-2 Spirit (itself larger than a Thunderhawk gunship would be)
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #247 on: March 19, 2012, 06:35:53 PM »
triple

Is interest waning? Should I try to pick up some slack on my end, plan my lessons faster? Stay up later, plan shorter updates?

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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #248 on: March 19, 2012, 06:42:38 PM »
I'm sorry for not having posted yet, I hope to finish something today or tomorrow, depending on how fast the theoretical work goes for my current project.

The bombers seem dangerous, I presume that they will strike at Coveton?
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #249 on: March 19, 2012, 07:07:37 PM »
With the IGT approaching, Marco's outstanding modelling projects mean less time for Marco's writing. Something is on the way though.
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #250 on: March 19, 2012, 07:28:47 PM »
Didn't intend to look pushy there, apologies if I did :X

Marco: IGT stuff is absolutely fine, but thank you in advance for anything you can add.

Dolnikan: "Dangerous" is one way of describing the bombers, but Zagan isn't an idiot -- he's not going to order a bombing run on Coveton while the Ancient's still there. There are other cities for him to blow up first.
Will PM you the bomber spec.

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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #251 on: March 19, 2012, 11:33:03 PM »
Very short update, will add more later.
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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #252 on: March 20, 2012, 12:35:59 AM »
There's a slight timing issue there, Sargoth. I couldn't give the exact time, but the Thunderhawk is landing during the night, not the day. (Unless I've completely screwed up...)
S.Sgt Silva Birgen: "Good evening, we're here from the Adeptus Defenestratus."
Captain L. Rollin: "Nonsense. Never heard of it."
Birgen: "Pick a window. I'll demonstrate".

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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #253 on: March 20, 2012, 05:59:53 AM »
Yeah, the Thunderhawk's managed to come down at night, and Iota snuck out while Andreas/Nogal were asleep to go and investigate.

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Re: Defiant Echoes: OOC
« Reply #254 on: March 20, 2012, 10:14:19 AM »
Ah, cheers. I'll fix it today.

EDIT: Fixed, improved and doubled in length. Very happy. Will update again soon. Sonneillon is going to VERY surprised to see other Traitor Legions here and, being both extremely unusual for a chaos marine and more than a little bit insane (in his own specific way) will be looking to talk to Goruvich (the rampaging Dreadnought doesn't look like much of a conversationalist).
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