Author Topic: Vanity OOC  (Read 1801 times)

Offline Koval

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Vanity OOC
« on: June 08, 2012, 03:20:04 PM »
One-off involving Macauley. Bits of it felt forced and very grindy, because I just can't write stuff for Macauley to save my life, but it moves her story along seeing as Lines Drawn ground to a halt, and resolves some Severino stuff as well, so in general I'm happy with it.

Don't ask me why it's called Vanity, because I don't know :P
« Last Edit: June 08, 2012, 03:24:01 PM by Koval »

Offline Dolnikan

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Re: Vanity OOC
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2012, 04:06:28 PM »
Poor Severino, it really isn;t his lucky day. If you want to we can still continue Lines Drawn.
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