Author Topic: The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)  (Read 1124 times)

Offline Dolnikan

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The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)
« on: August 24, 2012, 11:17:25 PM »
This is a story which will come in several parts about one of the unseen sides of the Imperial war machine, a simple inducted rating. I had this idea while laying awake at night and decided to type it out. I don;t really know yet where it will go but we'll see.

Please comment on it, I really hope to improve my writing, and of course to remove any background errors which I will inevitably make.
Circles of the wise My attempt at writing something, please comment on it if you have any advise.

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Re: The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 04:42:56 PM »
The first update is done, please let me know what you think about it.
Circles of the wise My attempt at writing something, please comment on it if you have any advise.

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Re: The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2013, 03:34:29 PM »
After quite a hiatus I have come back and started posting again, please let me know what you think about my writing.
Circles of the wise My attempt at writing something, please comment on it if you have any advise.