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Offline MarcoSkoll

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Re: Inquisitor FAQ leaflet
« Reply #30 on: February 13, 2020, 03:23:38 AM »
I've tried looking at Grammarly in the past. Mostly I found that with the free version, it spent most of its time complaining about common tautologies like "their own" (technically poor style, but doesn't actually make anything less clear), rather than pointing out useful things like unclear phrasing.

Mostly, I'll be happy if I can get several people to look over it without spotting any glaring errors or wondering if I've been at the obscura. (After all, it was reasonable before, and I've only changed a few things here and there).

And, with that in mind, many thanks for reading it through!
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Re: Inquisitor FAQ leaflet
« Reply #31 on: February 13, 2020, 08:39:28 AM »
No glaring errors jumped out at me as I read through it!