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Inquisitor Nerva Marcellinus Flavius Avitus (Ordos Xenos)

Started by Acolyte Havlan Tome, August 20, 2010, 06:09:06 PM

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Shannow

Can't really fault anything in his background really, I would still say bolter and force sword make him quite powerful, but given his tempered down Ws and Bs and I am assuming that he will be the main hammer in his force, then this is a good combo overall. Very nice!
I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched c-beams glitter in the dark near the Tanhauser Gate. All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in rain.

Time to die.

Jamas Orian

Actually, I'd say 61-70 is very good. But looking at him, I'd say although potent, he's not unduly powerful.

Acolyte Havlan Tome

His warband will consist of the three associates included in the background and an arco flagellant (on account of the mallors staggler question

Thanks again for the feedback
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

Shannow

Quote from: Jamas Orian on August 30, 2010, 11:09:58 PM
Actually, I'd say 61-70 is very good. But looking at him, I'd say although potent, he's not unduly powerful.

By tempered down, I meant from Havlan's original character post :P
I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched c-beams glitter in the dark near the Tanhauser Gate. All those moments will be lost in time, like tears in rain.

Time to die.

Acolyte Havlan Tome

I'm going to post the rules and history of each member of the warband here soon. Coming first vt seargeant "FIRE" Schwarz
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

Acolyte Havlan Tome

#20
Vt Seargeant   "FIRE" Schwarz
WS-61  
BS-60
S-68
T-64
I-63
WP-63
SG-68
NV-69
LD-80
Speed-4
 
Weapons-(from revised armoury) Heavy Bolter (with inferno special ammunition), 2 throwing axes, Power axe

Equipment-2x incendiary grenades, Flak armour on all locations but head,  
Skills- Force of will, Heroic
Special rules-None

NAME: Caladan "FIRE" Schwarz
RANK: Veteran Seargeant
AGE / GENDER: 75/Male
SPECIES: Human
HEIGHT:  5' 4''
EYES: Brown

EDIT 1-Stats
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

MarcoSkoll

Strength and toughness in the 70s range from someone who's only 5' 4"? I'd say that's a little overgenerous.
Continuing on that note, bear in mind the RIA's Heavy Bolter is Enc 100. That's a big weight penalty to shooting (unless he's resting it before each time he fires).

By my normal standards, I'd also say WP and Sg that high aren't the kind of thing I'd normally expect to see on this kind of character - generally, I limit stats of 70s and up to characters who actually specialise in the area, and an Imperial Guard Sergeant doesn't strike me as likely to be specialising in those stats.

One last thing, I 64 relates to Spd 4, not Spd 3 (unless he's got a Speed penalty for some reason).
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Acolyte Havlan Tome

#22
Speed was just a mistake, but with regard to strenth and toughness then i have lowered them both but kept streng high 60's. With regard to the heavy bolter then he is in the warband to provide covering fire and give th opponent something to worry about while Inquisitor Avitus does the what he needs to do but he will still get the odd hit and also i don't wan't him going around setting everyone on fire. Willpower is now low 60's but the Sg is still high 60's because he was Nerva's chief adviser in the siege.

Hope this satisfies all niggles if it doesn't just post again!!!

EDIT-Is there anything i should change on his equipment and skills.     Thanks again.
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

Acolyte Havlan Tome

#23
This is the next member of the warband but don't stop feedback on vt sgt schwarz, Thanks!
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Jusatt "LAS" Aclisius
WS-64  
BS-65
S-55
T-56
I-65
WP-73
SG-82
NV-74
LD-79
Speed-4
 
Weapons-(from revised armoury)- T(riplex) P(hall) Long Hot Shot Rifle*, Standard Extended Valdis Laspistol/SEV Las**

Equipment-Reflec armour on all locations but head
 
Skills-Fast draw

Special rules-None

* T(riplex) P(hall) Long Hot Shot Rifle- Hotshot mag, Long las barrel, Doppler muzzle, 28 megathule lasing chamber, Triplex Phall pattern, Standard Frame, Gyro-stabilised Stock.

Type   Rng   Mode    Acc         Dam   Shots   Rld   Enc   Spcl         Modes
Basic     D   Sg/Sm(2)   10%      3D6+3      10     2     55     LR   Low, Med,High

** Standard Extended Heruna Lasgun/SEH Las-Heavy Military mag, Extended Barrel, Standard Muzzle, 18 megathule lasing chamber, Heruna Pattern, Standard Frame

Type   Rng            Mode      Acc   Dam   Shots   Rld   Enc   Spcl         Modes
Pistol     B   Sm(3)/Full(6)      -            2D6+1      48     2     17     LR           Low


NAME: Jusatt "LAS" Aclisius
RANK: Rogue Trader
AGE / GENDER: 111/Male
SPECIES: Human
HEIGHT: 6' 0''  
EYES: Blue
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

Jamas Orian

That chap's mental stats are very high. Leadership would be reasonable, but 70s+ for the others seems a little excessive.

Flinty

Not quite sure why anyone would lug two two rifles around - would it not make more sense to replace the lasgun with a las pistol for close quarters protection - was that a typo anyway - I see he has fast draw? 
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Acolyte Havlan Tome

The second one is a pistol i just forgot to put it in when writing the stats on it but since i wrote pistol before writing the stats i have written rules for a rifle so are the stats still ok?????

EDIT-I also changed the mental stats
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

Acolyte Havlan Tome

Here is the next member of the warband
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Kanfert Loilon
WS-43 
BS-79
S-53
T-59
I-66
WP- 72
SG- 58
NV-74
LD-60
Speed-4
   
Weapons-(from revised armoury)- Suppressed revolver, Precision sniper

Equipment- 2x smoke grenades, density scope
 
Skills-Quickload

Special rules-None



NAME: Kanfert Loilon 
RANK: Bounty Hunter
AGE / GENDER: 67/Male
SPECIES: Human 
HEIGHT: 5' 9''
EYES: Blue
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating

Kaled

When are you planning on posting their background? It'd make it a lot easier to comment on their profiles. What models/conversions have you planned for them?

How come Jusatt has a laspistol that's Type Heavy and has a higher encumberance than his rifle? I'm guessing it's not supposed to be like that...

Shouldn't a bounty hunter have some way of capturing his targets alive? Maybe a shock maul, webber or something...
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Acolyte Havlan Tome

Thanks for all the feedback. With regards to the pistol i need to change the rules for it because i wrote the rules for a rifle so i'll edit that soon. For the bounty hunter then good point, would a needle pistol with a sleep toxin do the job??
If you catch sight of me twice your either lucky or not worth exterminating