Daemonhunter Ventriss Parabellum
WS BS S T I WP SG NV LD
80 52 58 61 50 74 58 68 75
Weapons:
Power Halbard, 2 x Dualing Pistol with 2 reloads, Combat Shotgun with 2 reloads, 4 Manstopper Rounds,
2 hellfire rounds
Armour:
Carapace all over except head. Pentagrammic Wards
Hirstory:
TBA
His initiative looks a bit low, about 70 would be better, thus making him Speed 5 which seems more appropriate for a daemon hunter who'd have to be decisive.
Otherwise you haven't posted enough to get proper feedback. You need to post some background, even if it's just some bullet points - even my comment about his initiative may be incorrect if his background implies a lower value. Also it'd be useful to post how you plan to model him to give people a better mental image of your character.
Just a quick question - is the combat shotgun pump-action or automatic?
Other than that, he looks good - although background would be appreciated.
Can't wait to see a model for him :)
Also,his sagacity and nerve are also maybe a bit low, but again it all depends on his background. What about skills/abilitites? (Not that he necessarily needs any.) Finally, who else do you plan to have in his warband?