Hello all!
After some time lurking on the forums, I finally decided to write something. The Tuloni III incident is my first attempt at WH40K, so bear with me if it's utter crap.
Comments and criticism welcome.
Well done, Wulf. I've read it beginning to end today, and, though at first, with the formal introduction of the characters and so, I thought it a bit slow paced, the detail and built-up in the end do contribute to my enjoyement of the whole.
Hope to return and see more of this.
Thanks, buddy. I must say that I'm not completely satisfied with it. It'd need quite a bit of tweaking, but I can't seem to find the time. Especially the dialog is weak at best, and I'm not real happy with the storyline either.
But I do have something simmering, so expect to see more at some point.
An update. Somewhat dialogue heavy, and a classic failure of "show, don't tell", but meh... *shrug*