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The Ordos Majoris - Roleplay => Out Of Character => Topic started by: Dolnikan on August 24, 2012, 11:17:25 PM

Title: The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)
Post by: Dolnikan on August 24, 2012, 11:17:25 PM
This is a story which will come in several parts about one of the unseen sides of the Imperial war machine, a simple inducted rating. I had this idea while laying awake at night and decided to type it out. I don;t really know yet where it will go but we'll see.

Please comment on it, I really hope to improve my writing, and of course to remove any background errors which I will inevitably make.
Title: Re: The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)
Post by: Dolnikan on August 29, 2012, 04:42:56 PM
The first update is done, please let me know what you think about it.
Title: Re: The Shield of Tyranny(OOC)
Post by: Dolnikan on January 28, 2013, 03:34:29 PM
After quite a hiatus I have come back and started posting again, please let me know what you think about my writing.