The Order of Krubal (http://www.the-conclave.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=78.0), telling the tale of an uneasy alliance and the hunt for one of their own kind - my forum namesake, Inquisitor Heroka Vendile.
Act 1 - Return
- A Gathering In The Smoke
- While Old Friends Upon a Gantry Meet
- A Lament For The Past
- Those Who Have Suffered
- For The Plans Of The Damned
Act 2 - History
- A Daemon Betrays
- The Game Begins
- The Hunters Come
- A Strange Land Visited
- An Uprising Made
- And All Shall Change
Act 3 - Consquences
- Those Left For Dead Shall Return
- A Doubting Lady Shall Find Solace
- And A Shadow Leads Another To Peril
- A Battle In The Skies
- Death In The Clouds
- And Order Shall Cease
Act 4 - Repercussions
- Until The End
- The Exchange
- Epilogue
- Prophesy
I have the entire storyline in my head, but only the first three parts written down (the third of which remains WIP, but should be done soon enough).
I know the first two parts have been seen before, but thoughts/comments/criticisms?
I read what went up on the medium-old Conclave, but so long ago that I barely remember.
I'll be reading this today, so there'll probably be more to this post by the morning.
Any further explanation or notes on who/what/why/when in the story, or is it strictly to be revealed IC?
Or has it just been abandoned?
Quote from: TheNephew on August 23, 2009, 02:56:32 PMAny further explanation or notes on who/what/why/when in the story, or is it strictly to be revealed IC?
A lot of things will be revealed IC, Act 2 is essentially a series of flashbacks to events prior, which help explain the situation a bit more.
The next instalment is also mostly flashback, going further back than most of the Act 2 ones.
QuoteOr has it just been abandoned?
Nope, I'm just a bit lazy.