Inquisitor Trevelyan and Soo'Neeq

[Gruchul]

Note this post is currently just rules for these two characters, but background and pictures should eventually follow!

Inquisitor Trevelyan

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WS BS S     T  I  Wp Sg Nv Ld
61 71 62/40 67 74 81 70 82 63

Wargear: Carapace armour on the chest/abdomen, no armour on head, flak everywhere else. Barrel-fed autopistol with one reload, MUI lasrifle, chainaxe, enhanced arm, advanced bionic eye.

Additional rules:
One Arm- This causes some inconvieniance as you might imagine. Drawing and sheathing the chainaxe is more difficult than for most for example. Reloading the autopistol does not suffer additional difficulty as a special mechanism in the reload pouch aids this action. The second strength value represents actions that would usually require two arms. He is most definitely right-handed too.

Hated Enemy (Eldar)- Struggles to contain his hatred towards the Eldar. He will more readily believe Eldar involvement in nefarious deeds if it is suggested in even the slightest way. In addition, as a general rule, he will never take one alive, or negotiate with them.

True Grit



Soo'Neeq

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WS BS S  T  I  Wp Sg Nv  Ld
54 42 70 65 68 91 92 100 20

Wargear: Bonespikes

Additional Rules:
Incorporeal

Psychic Powers- Telekinetic

Fearless

Fearsome



I am always conscious of going too far over or under an acceptable power-level so having you nice fellows make sure I don't go too far would be great. Any advice will be gladly recieved!

[Shannow]

As far as stats go they seem ok on the whole but overpowered pn Soo'neeq, but it is very hard to comment on them really with the lack of any background. For example Soo'neeq has 3 stats 90+ which is far too powerful generally BUT you may have an excellent story/background/reason for why these stats are this high, and the same goes for incorporeal, without background we have no idea why she should have this.

They sound like an interesting pair though, so getting the background up would be really helpful for getting feedback on the stats and I would certainly be interested in reading why they are the way they are

Rob

[Gruchul]

As far as stats go they seem ok on the whole but overpowered pn Soo'neeq, but it is very hard to comment on them really with the lack of any background. For example Soo'neeq has 3 stats 90+ which is far too powerful generally BUT you may have an excellent story/background/reason for why these stats are this high, and the same goes for incorporeal, without background we have no idea why she should have this.

They sound like an interesting pair though, so getting the background up would be really helpful for getting feedback on the stats and I would certainly be interested in reading why they are the way they are

Rob

Ah, in case it wasn't clear, Soo'neeq is a daemonhost. High intelligence and willpower might be great for an ordinary character, but a daemon with these stats is rather more likely to twist orders to suit its own agenda or to withhold information from its 'master'.

[MarcoSkoll]

My particular observation is...

...One armed Inquisitor? What happened to bionics or an arm cloned in a vat? Your background is going to need to explain how he lost the arm and why it's never been replaced.