Author Topic: Sin Of The Father OOC  (Read 1937 times)

Offline Swarbie

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Sin Of The Father OOC
« on: March 11, 2010, 12:21:17 PM »
Ok. This is where you can leave comments, criticism and general advice about my newly started story, Sin Of The Father. Check the In Character section.

Don't worry, I'm not giving up on Lux Eterna, but I thought I should get this out to the general public (ie; YOU, dear readers) before I forgot all about it.

So yeah. Please comment.
And I saw her body burning,
With it, my world
To dust returning

Offline Kallidor

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Re: Sin Of The Father OOC
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2010, 10:44:02 PM »
Noy much to comment on just yet but the intro seems interesting.
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Offline Swarbie

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Re: Sin Of The Father OOC
« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2010, 11:25:47 AM »
Thanks. Yeah, I know there's not much to go on. By the way, this relates closely to Fabio's little "episode" over in The War Of Shadows thread.
And I saw her body burning,
With it, my world
To dust returning

Offline Swarbie

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Re: Sin Of The Father OOC
« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2010, 10:24:14 AM »
Ok, just about to put an update in. Enjoy.
And I saw her body burning,
With it, my world
To dust returning