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The Order of Krubal: OOC

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Heroka Vendile:
The Order of Krubal, telling the tale of an uneasy alliance and the hunt for one of their own kind - my forum namesake, Inquisitor Heroka Vendile.

Act 1 - Return

* A Gathering In The Smoke
* While Old Friends Upon a Gantry Meet
* A Lament For The Past
* Those Who Have Suffered
* For The Plans Of The Damned
Act 2 - History

* A Daemon Betrays
* The Game Begins
* The Hunters Come
* A Strange Land Visited
* An Uprising Made
* And All Shall Change
Act 3 - Consquences

* Those Left For Dead Shall Return
* A Doubting Lady Shall Find Solace
* And A Shadow Leads Another To Peril
* A Battle In The Skies
* Death In The Clouds
* And Order Shall Cease
Act 4 - Repercussions

* Until The End
* The Exchange
* Epilogue
* Prophesy
I have the entire storyline in my head, but only the first three parts written down (the third of which remains WIP, but should be done soon enough).

I know the first two parts have been seen before, but thoughts/comments/criticisms?

TheNephew:
I read what went up on the medium-old Conclave, but so long ago that I barely remember.
I'll be reading this today, so there'll probably be more to this post by the morning.
Any further explanation or notes on who/what/why/when in the story, or is it strictly to be revealed IC?
Or has it just been abandoned?

Heroka Vendile:

--- Quote from: TheNephew on August 23, 2009, 02:56:32 PM ---Any further explanation or notes on who/what/why/when in the story, or is it strictly to be revealed IC?
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A lot of things will be revealed IC, Act 2 is essentially a series of flashbacks to events prior, which help explain the situation a bit more.

The next instalment is also mostly flashback, going further back than most of the Act 2 ones.


--- Quote ---Or has it just been abandoned?
--- End quote ---
Nope, I'm just a bit lazy.

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