Ha! So much for the weekend, about three weeks later than planned, but here we are with the next part of the story. Most of the delay was tweaking the second half and lots of uni work happening.
Damn it, had to make a small edit towards the end of the first section of the latest post, it would seem I never typed the end of a sentence, but that's been fixed now "his horror that her life might also be in danger." having been the absconding words.